Monday, March 9, 2009

If You Die Comments

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When tired of being into trouble,
I cry to my bitter end,
trying to figure my hopeless end,
the journey to my ready prepared land.
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Cindy Kreiner Sera 06 April 2009

Well thought and written Samweli yes, by setting an example for the young to follow you are helping to build a better tomorrow - and when you lay down for your final rest, it will be remembered. Cindy

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Winnie Angel 23 March 2009

..beautiful thoughts put into words..! ! !

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Chitra - 09 March 2009

beautiful write, choicest of words and wise thoughts

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anurag duggal 09 March 2009

A very great work of poetry for us to learn from.Thank you

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Edward Kofi Louis 09 March 2009

A very great work of poetry for us to learn from.Thank you. Edward Kofi Louis.

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Samweli Butobi

Samweli Butobi

Mwanza Tanzania
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