Saturday, October 12, 2013

If You 'D Let Your Walls Come Down Comments

Rating: 5.0

If you'd let your walls come down, then I could walk right in
To safely store your secrets, confess your every sin...

If you'd open up the latch, secures your steely gate
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Susan Lacovara
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V P Mahur 27 February 2014

Nice words with sweet thoughts. Thanks

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Anthony Burkett 02 February 2014

Brings to mind a picnic in a secluded meadow... sweet summer breezes... sitting beside a pond while dragonflies nip at water's surface and the cattails sway in the softness of summer... a very wistful feeling all in all...enjoyed this much.

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Sekharan Pookkat 13 October 2013

A lovely portrait, of life

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Susan Lacovara

Susan Lacovara

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