If You Cry, Try To Believe Comments

this is a marvellous piece of poetry, ....................................................................................................the lines i like the most are.................................................................''....If you feel the death on your head, If you fell into outside dust ''............ the poem has another characteristic that is the unique style, the style of polischuk, i like the style very much.

this is a really good poem...im only an ameteur but i love this poem...really good job

This poem contains a good piece of advice. I think we do not have to be afraid of sadness. Sadness is a normal feeling for each of us. But we should not get stuck in sadness and negativity. So true, the eternal wisdom of the Universe, whether we call it God or angels, is nver far away. We just have to want to connect with it. All too often we get so stuck in ego matters that we ignore the wondeful potential of our soul, our soul that can always connect with God.

Yup! In times of troubles we should let ourselves down, We should fight and fight, I remember, Rudyard Kipling poem If Where father advices his son! Good poem of philanthropy, Keep growing and keep writing!

But sadly, Ekaterina Polischuk, not everyone is blessed and the last paragraph is quite confusing and contradictory. Please explain.