Monday, October 7, 2013

If You Could Understand Comments

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I am writing with my blood
on scarlet paper,
so you can't find
my masterpiece
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Neela Nath Das
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Shahzia Batool 08 October 2013

yeh to boht intense he! ! !

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 08 October 2013

If you could understand, my tear, your dewdrop wouldn't have evaporated Beautiful images to convey the feelings. Thank you.

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Sekharan Pookkat 08 October 2013

Words scribed in blood Blotted in scarlet paper Adhered in our heart with tears Whether it is masterpiece or not

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Oh this world is far too blind To read whats written in blood or tears But each of us must comfort find In voices within and there will be no more fears..... (Good one - keep writing)

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 07 October 2013

fantastic write every thing is there nice Ma'am

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Heather Wilkins 07 October 2013

excellent write. If they could understand everything would be so simple.

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