Monday, November 16, 2009

If You Could. Comments

Rating: ★5.0

If there was room
for one more
in my bed,
I would ditch
...
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Fay Slimm
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Rani Turton 30 November 2009

Very sweet. Speaks a simple language known to all poets. Thanks Fay.

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David Harris 16 November 2009

Fay, that was really beautiful. I loved it. Top marks and thanks for sharing it with us my friend. Hugs David

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Daniel Kempson 16 November 2009

Very nice Fay so nicely said 10 Daniel

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Carol Gall 16 November 2009

wow fay very very beautiful 10

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Tom Balch 16 November 2009

The wanting, once again, lovely piece Fay, I do however feel soory for Ted lol regards Tom 10/10

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
Fay Slimm
Fay Slimm
in Cornwall U.K.
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