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Not as easy as one may think to get someone beloved propelled out of mind and memories as both relate mutually and have good vibes and are said to be on same wavelength....so one without the other will affect the whole stature of a person.......short and succinct.......thanks for sharing....10

This is magnificent. We may believe that it is easy or simple or even able to dictate to our memory. What I think we fail to realize is that memory is tied to consciousness, which is linked to personality. Purging the memory, therefore, has consequences for the whole of one's person, personality. A terrific poem, Rajnish.

the words have been from the depth of truth... a nice poem, in deed. pallab chaudhury

This short poem describes the feelings that every one faces. It's just an impulse. Soon he realizes the loved ones, by the passage of time, are busy in the unavoidable fatigues of life and have a lesser time for him. But then comes a moment when the loved ones give him the full attention to him. This pleasure heels all the pains. Rajnish Manga has nicely painted this feeling in a lovely poem

A poignant write, I hope its' not about you. take care and smile.

No we live in hearts we loved when we die they find another sad but true tis order of the day your HINDI POETRY can only be read if you add a translation PH is an English site you know it Kash! Agar hum aap kay jaise Hindi poetry kay nawab hotey Kash hum bhee ek din aap kay desh kay sitaray hote sahe kee naheen Hum toe ENGLISH MEIN HEE HAIN MAHEEN HINDI thodi thodi some sweet kuchhh kuchhh namkeen ARE you to read me keen a desire sangeen! many a flowing river I have seen Thames BLUE NILE GANGES and Brahmaputra AND AMAZON AND HUDSON MOSTLY I LOVE IS NIAGARA AS IT FALLS have kya you ever seen 'tis lovely like seeing Taj is a dream so is Niagara Fall COME SEE!

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a thought provoking poem of trying to move on in life? ..............wonderfully penned RM.

Sometimes simple words strike you harder than anything else. Apparently you can easily let go of the beloved but the underlying pain of separation is felt by the reader. It's a sure 10 for me.

These impressions, emotions come from mind because of our family, society, state troubles and these troubles are well portrayed by your pen. Poet, your expressions are pathetic need sympathetic; loveless, need love, careless, need care, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , thank you for sharing the poem with us,10

It is human to feel unwanted, so let others disown you. What does it matter? The poem is about honesty not self-pity.

Disown me if you like! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Perhaps you also can throw out the old memories? Isn't writing great, we can bring new order into our life by these plays of words.

This poem is very sensitive and thought provoking. This not only talks about memories but also reflects current status of society during old age a person suffers. A memory gained in mind remains within either in silently or in blooming condition. This is not easier to remove this memory out. Life is full of memories. Wonderfully penned poem is shared here....10