If You Came My Way... Comments

If you came my way, a breeze it would be humming sweetly to me.....sweet expresion. A fascinating poem.

Oh, I just felt all the tension in me unwind. Due to an incredibly gentle and soothing write. Perfect, Nosheen, perfect! This deserves more than a bouquet of ten's- this deserves Poem of the Day every day for a year! 10's and onto my fav list!

Fantastic, hope, desire and longing nicely put together...10+++

There are poems that touch after reading again and again but it's a poem that touches the heart in a single reading. On a warm June day If you came my way I'd be home at last After miles and miles of road. Amazing lines!

Something familiar that brings one home...the desire of so many. A terrific poem, Nosheen.

A breeze, the shade and home. I can't imagine anything better.

I too like the image of a sweetly humming breeze in summer. The poem unwinds both the speaker and the reader. Thanks for sharing Nosheen. :)

This poem is a great illustration to show that there is much beauty in simplicity! It has given me the feel of a breeze coming and caressing my face and tousling my hair! A poem so glamorous without being ostentatious!

it is a lovely write and i like this -Humming sweetly to me- very much.. :)

A warm day! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

I'd be home at last, very beautiful lines of love and destination. in the fate of an electron, is there any probability to stop and fall on the nucleus! beautiful poem

Hi Nosheen, Lovely. A poem of love, wait and anticipation: On a warm June day If you came my way A breeze it would be Humming sweetly to me- : Wonderfully written: The Lover coming to her as lightly and soothingly as a gentle breeze. But he hums something to her too.. On a warm June day If you came my way A shade it would be The shade of a thousand trees How gorgeous! ! ! The arrival of the lover is as goods as shades on a warm day! Shades of a thousand trees. And finally, On a warm June day If you came my way I'd be home at last After miles and miles of road. -the arrival of the lover leaves as comfortable as if she has reached home after a travail of miles and miles... The poem just delves into the depths of her heart and comes out with gems of expression of her love... Marvelously written! ! A full 100++++