If You Awaken Before Me Comments

The poem flows very well. A wonderful romantic piece, If you wake up before me...

A love we all dream of, a beautiful written poem dear Lora.

Another glorious poem you are very talented

Such a beautiful poem, a lovely poetic expression of love in beautiful words.

A very pretty piece of writing. Thanks for posting.

I feel inspired by your style of writing. Your use of language is beautiful. Wonderful creation, lovely and very passionate.

Mesmerizing poetry, loved every bit of it. Warm Regards, Bipasha

Kiss me gently! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Bursting with beauty and loaded with a love that is refreshing!

Kiss me gently.... stroke my hair, Give me reason not to weep Make my dreams reality Tell me how much you love me, I love you more than life itself.... i loved these lines in your poem. awakening in love and for your love. is a wonderful feeling. thank you tony

Great stuff. To awaken to one's love is one of the best treasures in the world.

This! Is! Beautiful! A thing of the heart excellent articulation... Pleasant diction... Your poem smells good

Lovely poem. I love the line... if you awaken before me...

Wow absolutely loved this, beautiful, from the tears of the opening stanza 'If you awaken before me And I'm crying in my sleep, ' to the intrigue of If you awaken before me And you need to hear me say: I love you more than life itself.... Awaken me..... you know the way! that resonates 'Awaken me..... you know the way! ' I can get lost in that line :)

Really very much wonderful poem of the shared. Gently awakening before is really very nice.10.

Tried to leave a comment earlier, but the computer seems to have lost it. This is very well done, Lora, and congratulations on Poem of the Day!

A very lucid, beautiful poem of warmth and love!

Very nice poem 10 out of 10! congrats!

If you awaken before me Circle my neck by hug glee Surround me by warm sea As rose bud by honey bee.

Thanks for this lovely poem. Though, it is kind of a monologue of a loving heart, the second part is an obvious one that makes it a romantic dialogue.