Sunday, February 10, 2013

If You Are Mirage, I'M Quicksand Comments

Rating: 5.0

In the midst of unending sand-land,
I witnessed an Oasis, full of greens
and the water was glistening as the
diamond eyes of my beloved.....
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Neela Nath Das
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Unwritten Soul 11 February 2013

Halder, it was a nice poem, i like the title a lot, its like a mirage to go and read the poem once we read we fell into the quicksand of words...hahahaha nice! _Soul

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Valsa George 10 February 2013

We often get deluded by mirage and life often turns out to be a blistering desert! A beautiful poem which is very enjoyable! Thanks for being introduced to your site and thanks for the nice comment!

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Chandra Thiagarajan 10 February 2013

A very nice imagination of being caught in a desert chasing the Mirage and becoming the Quicksand!

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