If We Could Live Forever Comments

Beautiful

this is lovely. Thank you for sharing Andrew

In life we only get one chance To do the things we should, So if your life is long or short Just try to do some good. Verily, we should do good deeds, and love one and all unconditionally. Loved reading it........10

Thanks for reminding by your wonderful poem that we should bring peace into this world in our lifetime. Forever is all today :)

What a super write Andrew, it says so much and the storyline is woven so well. A delight to read, another of your superb writes. Great contents, just great. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

Andrew Your poem is what the inhabitants of this world need to read. I would say in Primary School it should be essential reading, as in Australia, religion is not taught in schools any more because of the different nationalities. It so though provoking and beautifully penned. Karin Anderson

Wise and wonderful Andrew. Let us hope. Regrds Ann

Yes, in life long or short we get only one chance to do what we like and it is better we prefer to do good so that peace and happiness we can surely get without doubt!