If We Can Touch The Stars.. So Why We Insist On Wars. Comments

Khoobsurat beautiful expression

Well I can see you have had a very normal childhood. All the conflicts of a happy childhood! * War* my *grandmother* told me Hatred is the cause of all this strife! When I was a child the word hate was like a cuss word. Indeed this word as cause many of deaths many of sorrows if we could only delete it from the human mind. However, nature must run it course. I Loved the Book *Men are from Mars and Women are from Venus*! It might shed some light why men takes the punishment.

without memories, we have nothing. what can we compare life to if we have no memories.

Dear poet friend, I am very sorry for being very late to respond.You have penned it very touchingly.I see the entire picture in my mind.Fabiyas

Good poem. Except memories your poem also gives message if this world has capibility to do any thing even to go to stars why should not be utilised for positive things.

i love your style of writing, keep it up! ! !

I like your poem because it is very personal. I like how you put your own experiences to show the good points of life. Good job :)

wow thats breath taking i like that u made it on memories great poem

Wow, I like your take on memories, they are not regretted. To regret is not to move forward, which moving forward seems to be a strong theme is this passage. Great poem :)

You've summed up the reminiscent moments and entwined them to a good message at the end.ALL RECIPE OF A GOOD POEM!

This poem makes me remember about all the memories from my childhood and this is a great poem very nice and sweet :) goodjob! Keep writing

This is good, man, really good. Keep the child alive throughout the time you are here. Remember and keep thinking in the simple terms of children. Remembering our lessons we learned and our ideals, will help you to become a wonderful person and remain as such. Fantastic poem

Good questions! .... life could be so good if it wasn't for wars. Lovely memories of childhood, thanks for sharing.

So beautiful and touching! keep going :) 10!

In memories we keep something deep. A family that we haven't seen a very long time. Not through a child's eyes. I love this poem keep writing them.

could you read my poem I don't think anyone has read it tell me what you think?

wow, that is a very touching poem sounds really authentic and real, well done.

heart touching pom...skillfully written

hey! ! amazing poem this is, rated 10! ...great piece of work! ! ! post more just like this...It really brought my good old memories back too! ! thnx for telling me about it! keep it up! very sensational.

This is nice! The memories will be forever treasured in your heart and held dear! So nice and heart melting!