Saturday, October 7, 2023

If We Are Called To Say The Truth Comments

Rating: 4.8

If we are called to say the truth
Unseal our lips
And let our heart pump
Blood of truthfulness that
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Rose Marie Juan-austin
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We are here with the Poemhunter to evaluate and enrich the quality of poems. It is childish like a primary school pupil to point out grammatical imperfections which matured poets ignore. In my opinion this poem has perfectly brought out the poet's intention.

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Rebecca Navarre 18 October 2023

Filled with such beauty, power and inspiration! .. Truly magnificent to read! .. Endless 10'S And of course Endless Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Rebecca Navarre 18 October 2023

This holds such deep beauty and meaning! .. Absolutely Beautiful Rose Marie! ..

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Indira Renganathan 18 October 2023

Always amplified voices only can emphatically say the truth while a single voice opens a beginning for an investigation...good write Rose...liked

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Kingsley Egbukole 10 October 2023

The voice of truth stands alone and erect. No matter how much we reject the truth, it will be accepted at last.

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Anjandev Roy 10 October 2023

They can Pierce the dark clouds.... magnificent.....thank u, dear poetess..

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Bri Edwards 09 October 2023

It's good I'm retired! ! I have lots of time to 'SHOOT MY MOUTH OFF'.

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Bri Edwards 09 October 2023

and....I personally don't like when EACH line begins with a C A P I T A L letter. Sometimes [but not always] lack of punctuation where I would use it, and/or uncalled for capitalization interferes with my understanding & enjoyment of the poem.

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Bri Edwards 09 October 2023

Some commas would be welcomed by me. : ) Incomplete sentences leave me wondering: ' What's missing/not said? ? ? '

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Bri Edwards 09 October 2023

St.3 is a Complete Sentence. BUT you end EACH stanza with a period [your ONLY punctuation marks which I noticed].

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Bri Edwards 09 October 2023

ON ANOTHER SERIOUS NOTE: I feel that your stanza 1 & stanza 2 are BOTH incomplete sentences.

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Bri Edwards 09 October 2023

BUT, truthfully, truthfulness is always 'safe' to promote TRUTHFULNESS. bri : )

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Bri Edwards 09 October 2023

HEY, PH, STOP SUBMITTING MY WORDS BEFORE I AM READY, DONE FIXING WHAT PH &/or THIS PC HAS DONE TO 'MESS THINGS UP'! ! ! ! : (

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Bri Edwards 09 October 2023

NONE OF MY FOLLOWING WORDS ARE THE TRUTH. I LOVE YOU, ROSE MARIE. I LIVE TO WORSHIP YOU, KISS (OR LICK) THE PATH YOU WALK ON[ AND..... {CONT.}

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Denis Mair 07 October 2023

'Let the heart pump blood of tuthfulness.'...This rings true to my experience, because I my chest gets clammy and my heart beats faster when I feel driven to write something that is very meaningful to me. I want to write it before I forget.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 07 October 2023

ONE thing is crystal clear: These songs of Truth: Blood of truthfulness that Will flow in our entire being. Most beautiful and finest Poem, I can feel it through our entire being. Profound poem, which I enjoyed tremendously. TOP Marks for the great Poetess.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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