If We Are Called To Say The Truth Comments

We are here with the Poemhunter to evaluate and enrich the quality of poems. It is childish like a primary school pupil to point out grammatical imperfections which matured poets ignore. In my opinion this poem has perfectly brought out the poet's intention.

Filled with such beauty, power and inspiration! .. Truly magnificent to read! .. Endless 10'S And of course Endless Stars! ..+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

This holds such deep beauty and meaning! .. Absolutely Beautiful Rose Marie! ..

Always amplified voices only can emphatically say the truth while a single voice opens a beginning for an investigation...good write Rose...liked

The voice of truth stands alone and erect. No matter how much we reject the truth, it will be accepted at last.

They can Pierce the dark clouds.... magnificent.....thank u, dear poetess..

It's good I'm retired! ! I have lots of time to 'SHOOT MY MOUTH OFF'.

and....I personally don't like when EACH line begins with a C A P I T A L letter. Sometimes [but not always] lack of punctuation where I would use it, and/or uncalled for capitalization interferes with my understanding & enjoyment of the poem.

Some commas would be welcomed by me. : ) Incomplete sentences leave me wondering: ' What's missing/not said? ? ? '

St.3 is a Complete Sentence. BUT you end EACH stanza with a period [your ONLY punctuation marks which I noticed].

ON ANOTHER SERIOUS NOTE: I feel that your stanza 1 & stanza 2 are BOTH incomplete sentences.

BUT, truthfully, truthfulness is always 'safe' to promote TRUTHFULNESS. bri : )

HEY, PH, STOP SUBMITTING MY WORDS BEFORE I AM READY, DONE FIXING WHAT PH &/or THIS PC HAS DONE TO 'MESS THINGS UP'! ! ! ! : (

NONE OF MY FOLLOWING WORDS ARE THE TRUTH. I LOVE YOU, ROSE MARIE. I LIVE TO WORSHIP YOU, KISS (OR LICK) THE PATH YOU WALK ON[ AND..... {CONT.}

'Let the heart pump blood of tuthfulness.'...This rings true to my experience, because I my chest gets clammy and my heart beats faster when I feel driven to write something that is very meaningful to me. I want to write it before I forget.

ONE thing is crystal clear: These songs of Truth: Blood of truthfulness that Will flow in our entire being. Most beautiful and finest Poem, I can feel it through our entire being. Profound poem, which I enjoyed tremendously. TOP Marks for the great Poetess.