Friday, April 11, 2008

If Walls Could Speak Comments

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If walls could speak
they'd say hello
they saw me not breathing
and my life begin to close.
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Jade Hasbro
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Emily Oldham 13 September 2008

Walls often listen to whispered coversations... if only they could talk as well! But in this poem they do, they're more than just a pile of bricks. Love it! Thanks. :) Please write some more, I love your poems! Athena xx

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Aisha Love 13 April 2008

this poem is great it seems as if the walls were people

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Will P. Litter 11 April 2008

Your poem felt like there were more than walls. Thanks for sharing

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