Monday, April 6, 2015

If Trees Can Talk Comments

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If trees can talk,
even a mindless rumble.
Everyone will gawk,
but they remain stiff and sombre.
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Kwai Chee Low
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Edward Kofi Louis 15 July 2016

Yes! They will teach us the secrets of nature. Able to understand life than, to destroy the trees around us. Nice work.

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Kwai Chee Low 15 July 2016

Thank you, Edward. Even when trees are motionless, they seem to be contemplating, don't you agree?

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Cigeng Zhang 03 April 2016

[If tree can talk...], wind responses... an imaginative line.

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Kwai Chee Low 04 April 2016

Thank you, Cigeng. Trees are solidly motionless which inspired me to write a haiku Haiku Serenity.

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Cigeng Zhang 03 April 2016

[If tears can talk...], or dove cries... I liked your first line. A good write. Thank you for the work.

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Kelly Kurt 06 April 2015

A Lovely poem, Kwai Chee Low Thanks for sharing

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Kwai Chee Low 07 April 2015

Thank you, Kelly. I am glad you like it.

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