Dear mother,
just now I realized
that man's stay on earth
is but limited
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A touching write indeed. There is sadness in the lines as you are afraid of losing your dear ones. Emotion is running thick in the poem. Nice. Congrats.
well done and well deserved for a deeply felt poem. Much enjoyed it.
Though life may be short live it! Live it now! The present is here and it we see, but the future is unknown!
Congratulations on poem of the day. You chose a great topic.
As a mother and grand mother I'm moved very much by your poem...God bless you-10
Heartiest Congrats on the POD for this beautifully envisioned equally beautiful and meaningful poem.
Congratulations on being selected member of the day for heart touching poem Isatou Col Muhammad Khalid Khan
Yes! ! Our days are numbered. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
A poem that touched my heart, Yes when someone write with such a passion it reaches the goal....10+++
And do remember that though life be short and unpredictable its still a beautiful life, live it I did! ........... Live life to the fullest..... Congrats for the second time around......
What a superb creation! Loved the way you wrote it. Thanks mum, the great mother of this poem. 10 for it. Subhas
Once again this lovely poem has been chosen as poem of the day, just as it was a little over three years ago. Excellent work.
It is so beautiful, so lovely, the poem, the poet and her feelings for her mother! ! Tomorrow may or may not come, but beautiful memories last long! !
Like this a lot, L7 needs (my POV) I not i, but I prefer straight grammar.
no matter how strained a relationship is LOVE conquers all even if tomorrow is just a promise... a ten from me..lovely poem..
Earnest and endearing. The deep prism of this uncertain life glimpsed through the eyes of a young poet, sharing with us what she sees from where she stands. Well done, poignantly and beautifully written. Congratulations.