I had done the undone
and I had been held captive
but I was left with one choice
to battle with anything to see the light
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To see the light i have to battle with anything that comes on the way........ very nice thoughts. thank you dear poet.... tony
I really like this piece. The brevity of it adds emphasis to the point made. You chose carefully each word so as to squeeze the most meaning possible into your poem. Truly a piece that shows talent, intelligence, and determination. Very well done
Beautiful train of thought nicely encapsulated in good diction with conviction. An insightful poem elegantly brought forth. Thanks for sharing Praise. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.