Monday, May 1, 2017

If This World Comes To Fall Apart Comments

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If this world comes to fall apart,
Comes to burn in the fire some day,
Still without fear in heart,
I will sleep on your shoulder again.
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Anna Osipova
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Mila Bell 18 September 2023

a beautiful poem!

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Chinedu Dike 26 May 2018

Beautiful love poem elegantly brought forth from the heart. A nice creation embellished in poetic rhyme and rhythm, lovely and very passionate. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Rajnish Manga 02 July 2017

The poem is devoted to love with a commitment to remain unshakable under trying conditions and adverse circumstances. Thanks. I will sleep on your shoulder again. years go by.... I'm walking it by your side.

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Siddartha Montik 08 May 2017

Good Poem expressing the strength of Trust. and Love. Well expressed!

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Christopher Tye 08 May 2017

Wonderful poem, an absolute delight to read

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Akhtar Jawad 01 May 2017

I have translated this poem in Urdu (National language of Pakistan) and title of the translation is Agar Yeh Dunya NahiN Rahegi.

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Akhtar Jawad 01 May 2017

A great poem on love, one of the best I have ever read. Yes, we have no controls on natural and man brought destruction, so why to waste our life in fears, let us make it a beauty and joy in love.

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Anna Osipova 02 May 2017

I'm happy that my poetry inspires you!

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