Tuesday, March 29, 2016

If This Were Your Last Day? Comments

Rating: 4.5

If this were your last day
how would you spend it?
I know I would feel an urgency
I would want to tell those closest to me
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Norah Tunney
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Mj Lemon 06 April 2017

This is very thought provoking, Norah. And I'm in agreement. If I knew this was my last day, I'd try to pack into it as much living, as much experience, as I've had in the preceding half-century plus. I do once remember someone answering a similar question with an I don't know. I always ask how much living such a person has done. An exceptional poem, Norah.

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Norah Tunney 07 April 2017

I suppose we would need to be in good health to do the things we envision. But we can always do them now MJ. What an amazing life! ! ! ! Thank you for your thoughtful comment.

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Edward Kofi Louis 17 April 2016

Thank you one more time! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Norah Tunney 25 April 2016

Thanks Edward

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Mike Smith 03 April 2016

Not a bad way to go. If only we all could end in such a way

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Norah Tunney 04 April 2016

We can always fantasize Mike

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Amar Agarwala 02 April 2016

Only a poet can think of the shortness of life and of impending death, and describe it in such wonderful verses.

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Norah Tunney 25 April 2016

That's what we poets do Amar we reflect deeply on everything

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 29 March 2016

Eating, drinking and making love are all one can do, is something too strange and shocking! ! What would anyone do for their soul at the last moment of life, if they were informed earlier? Luckily the time of last moment is still kept as a secret knowing the characters of human, it seems! ! ! ! ! ! Thank you for the poem..Norah!

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Norah Tunney 29 March 2016

It's interesting VS I lived in a monastery for many years I was a spiritual seeker Now my spirituality is the present moment And the deepest gratitude for every amazing moment of existence Thank you for your comment It's all such a mystery?

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Edmund Strolis 29 March 2016

There are questions that I ask people that are a window into their soul. A measure of their depth or sometimes the chance to learn something new about them or to discover and release an original wit. If this were your last day says so much about you and the last day would be filled with the things that are rich in a celebration of life. A steak, fine wine and yes a loved one....................splendid. Carpe Diem

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Norah Tunney 29 March 2016

Yes thank you Edmund I feel a heightened sense of aliveness when I think about death I want to live every moment to the hilt And with every fiber of my being.

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