If This Be Love Comments

I willingly throw both arms wide, if faith can bring you to my side. These walls I've built so strong and stout, like Jericho, fall at your shout.....if this be love, then we should share it......... thank u dear poet. a very fine poem well worded and meaningful. tony

........beautiful theme and beautiful flow :) ★

I like the rhyme pattern of the poem. Love is a positive emotion and should be encouraged and nurtured on its arrival to blossom. A lovely poem well articulated and nicely penned. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

What a beautiful poem, so full of emotion. Love the reference to the Walls of Jericho falling or surrendering like a heart in love.

I gladly place all in your care. If this be love...that we would share. I enjoy this verse...beautifully rhythm poem! !

Nice poem Perry. Have you made a mistake in the last verse: 'my sould'? or is it me?

'like jericho', wow a fantastic love poem with a fine flow to it dat i soo enjoyd. Pls do read my newest to tel me if its ok.