Tuesday, January 28, 2014

If These Leaves Fall Comments

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We have met before
I do not know where
It was not in this life
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Lyn Paul
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Liliana ~el 05 February 2014

This is so beautiful, showing care and concern reaching out from a close, rooted relationship.

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Kanav Justa 02 February 2014

... i like this poem very much... the way you have written this one... is great

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Fiona Schwartzinoff 29 January 2014

Your heart is here to heal Your smile is here to glow Your trail of life Is here to satisfy others Selfishness is allowed On your tree of life Very beautiful... Do unto others for we are all one family created by One God. Love your expression - a very sagacious voice.

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Valerie Dohren 29 January 2014

We are all part of the tree of life, sharing its common seed - lovely write Lyn.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 29 January 2014

Very insightful and inspiring as we all have hailed from that Garden of Eden.............Lyn........well penned

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Gajanan Mishra 29 January 2014

We are all part of life-tree, good writing really Lyn, thanks.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 29 January 2014

if only we could keep in mind the common ancestry...a truly inspiring reminder.

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Geetha Jayakumar 28 January 2014

Beautiful lines Lyn from a kind heart. We have met before, I do not know where. Very true said some connection is there. May be we are the branches of same tree. If all think this way, how the the world would have been. Beautiful flow of words. Loved reading it.

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