If There Where No Hunger? Comments

Your poem ends with the logical conclusion based on what you wrote: The nature of man never changes/never changes for anyone. I sincerely wish I could object to your conclusion and argue with you, but alas you are speaking the truth, however sad it is to hear it. However, having read about nine of your poems tonight, I'm in an optimistic mood, because as long as there are young people like you with your intelligence, sensitivity, and your willingness to speak for human values, I have hope in the future. Be Well, Do Good Work, and Keep Writing Your Poetry! !

Hahahaha. I like the twist at the end.