Thursday, August 10, 2017

If There Were No Moon, (Rondeau Redouble) Comments

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If there were no moon dark would be the night;
the sun bereft without her maiden glow.
Our eyes devoid of her seductive light
and all her gifts once lavishly bestowed.
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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 August 2017

Definitely night would be the entirely dark if there were no moon. Her gifts are once lavishly bestowed. Light ignites mind and directs flight of life. We crave our mother's light and all her gifts are once lavishly bestowed. Nature is just like mother. Perception that nature gives is precious. An interesting poem is beautifully presented.10

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Ash Adetayo 10 August 2017

If there were no moon, darkness would be the ligth...nice imaginary poem

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