Sunday, October 29, 2006

If There Is A Letter Box In Heaven Comments

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Did you choose the weeping willow
to hang from for its ironic sentiment
If so you should have stayed
for you had much more to give alive.
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Katie Hudson 29 October 2006

This is really emotive, and I think it's because you avoid the flowery cliches that people so often associate with the death of a loved one. The hope that he is painting the angel's wall forges a link between his living self and the spirit he has become. I absolutely love the realism, and think that the humour was really suitable.

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Patricia Gale 29 October 2006

An awesome write, well done!

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