Wednesday, April 15, 2015

If The Woman Comments

Rating: 4.5

If the woman
Was one ounce under 350 pounds
I'd have been surprised
And the last place
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Raymond Farrell
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Lorraine Colon 16 April 2015

How funny! But you are so right. Obesity is a problem now - healthwise, and it's not very pretty, either. When will people wake up? I think they have no mirrors in their houses. Very good poem - truth delivered in a most entertaining way.

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Raymond Farrell 16 April 2015

Thank you for taking time to read the poem. It is sad to realize how people's behavior undermines their health, and yet a simple change would make such a difference in the health of the nation overall.

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