If The One I Love Goes Before My Eyes... Comments
If the one I love goes before my eyes
And I as well get drunk on grief,
Shall fade away our sweetest lies
Or shall my heart get broken into briefs.
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Sad theme. Excellently expressed. You are so young and yet so sage. Congratulations, young poet, the best is yet to come.
Death is an inevitable reality of life! Whether we like it or not, we have to accept it! Yet the death of those who are close to our heart make us drunk with grief! Great poem for your age Saheb!
A beautiful poem describing human sentiments............................................10
Our lives should be framed with the works of love. Thanks for sharing.
A wonderfully written poem on the philosophy of life and death with wisely chosen words. Great work Saheb.
Verily, joy and sorrow are the pillars of life....10
Days of sweetness come and go away. Happiness does not last for long. Sorrows too do not last for long. Wise poem shared really on life and death topic.....10
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7/19/2025 5:52:22 AM # 1.0.0
A nice poetic imagination, Sahib. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks