If The Flames Do Not Turn Your Bones Into Ash Comments

A multi-million star poem but they only allow 5 stars so I give you the best they have

Part 2---You may walk again through countless fields and endless roads They will remember you for only a blink of the Universe's Eye but the fields and roads shall know You for all Eternity---Awesome awesome awesome

I favorited this awesome poem. If I had the power, I would make this Poem of the YEAR! ! ! This is top flight writing--worthy of being called LITERATURE and placed in an anthology of poetry for a college class.

Another comment from Write Out Loud I wrote on that poetry website " The poem ending is my attempt at a William Blake style of writing." the comment left was: " Blake will be happy as he reads this Clive, I really enjoyed reading this"

Here's another good comment from Write Out Lout poetry website: " Clive, I have read a good amount of your poetry recently and enjoyed many. This poem has a special attraction for me as I often contemplate our mortality, its consequences and significance. I look forward to reading more Thank you for this, "

I put this poem on the poetry website Write Out Loud here's a comment " I really like this. I should never have read it more than once." my reply: " I originally put this poem on poem hunter and people almost over analysed it which was fun to read but society broke down, entire crops were lost..."

its great and lovely writing on soul eternity 10+++++++++++++

They will remember you for only a blink of the Universe's Eye. very original thinking and presentation...... thank u dear poet. tony

the fire burns my corpse the mud devours my corpse the ocean gives opportunity its animal to swallow my corpse flesh or bone or shapeless I am a remembrance being in my activities even after death as the crawling time of eternity

Well I guess I see this simply as the fact that if your bones do not turn into ash you will become one with the earth and return over and over again...a form of rebirth...you will be reborn and walk the endless roads and countless fields over and over again as another...something?

Nice work. Thanks for sharing

How to become immortal, how to live even after death is eternity. A thoughtful poem. Congrats.

Wow! Good poem..it gave me goosebumps! I'll look for your books

They will remember you for only a blink of the Universe's Eye Beautiful write. Thanks.10 for the poem.

They will remember you for only a blink of the Universe's Eye but the fields and roads shall know You for all Eternity A nice write. 10++

You may walk again through countless fields and endless roads They will remember you for only a blink of the Universe's Eye Beautiful poem. 10++

- - -You may walk again through countless fields and endless roads- - -There immortality of man.... is there not such thing, or is there? Great poem that made me go humm.. loved it, thanks for sharing. Congratulations on being chosen for poem of the day.

a thoughtful poem of what is an on going happening right now in the physical world of which we all live and die? ...................well penned CC.

You may walk again through countless fields and endless roads.. yes, it is true. Life road is endless. After death soul will take rebirth as soul is immortal. Beautiful poem shared. Thanks for sharing and congratulation for being selected as poem of the day.

Death is not the end of the soul. There will be re-birth to continue the work half done. A very nice poem and congrats.