If That's The Only Way I Can Be With You Comments

wow so powerful and fanastic job different style i never saw 10++++ kept it up

so powerful.i love this poem.

nice presentation..but so sad dear....so sad...

Hi Lee - This is a very dark poem full of anguish and remorse and a threat of suicide at the end - awesome! It is an interesting account because it follows a recognisable pattern and a process through which we all pass at sometime. We all lode hope especially if the focus of our love is dead - this is hinted at at the end. 'I want to be daed.................If that's the on ly way i can be with you'. The path to despair and comntempletion of suicide is familiar. In your account it starts with the EYES and then we begin to CHOKE and then Faint. The intensity of your anguish affects your legs - we begin to be paralysed and you desire to e dead. There is a painful way back through getting 'Mental Closure' and coming to terms with the past. Begin to count your blessings and think of all the people who love and need you! It is an interestin FREE VERSE POEM and I give it a TEN. Love in poetry - John.

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