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Meaningful write.... i can feel a heart really in need of love, care and support. good one.. Rgs Rema

this is one nice poem

I liked this poem a lot, would have preferred the 'u' to be written as 'you' but that's a personal standpoint, makes for readability which is what I feel.

you need his love most and he too yours...a love poem that conveys pure and sincere love...remember my previous comment, aparna! ...your talent has started showing! *10*

Great poem... it made me think of my wife! I have to make a move NOW! A 10.