Thursday, January 23, 2020

If So What Can Be Better Comments

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If my life's river be in spate,
What would I want better than that?
Should someone love still till this date,
What can I want still more than that?
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Valsa George 25 January 2020

We feel blessed when we get certain things in life, especially when we are weighed down by adversities. To a poet, getting good readers is a boon and it can delight him/her more than many other things. Unfortunately most of us have many encumbrances and cannot devote much time to write or encourage the writings of fellow poets, A well expressed poem!

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Aniruddha Pathak 26 January 2020

Your point is very relevant, thanks indeed, but I want to take a diversion... Most often a poet speaks for an unknown someone, an editorial you often is a poetic I. Also, genuine appreciation is good, but if it becomes part of good manners, politically safe, etiquette oriented, then... It pays to dwell on this point. I am always in favour of genuine constructive criticism.

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Edward Kofi Louis 23 January 2020

Of greater worth is the truth! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Aniruddha Pathak 24 January 2020

'Of greater worth is the truth! ! ! ! '... yes indeed

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