If she walks away
The skies would no longer be blue,
Nor would the morning cheer up up the times,
Just as pallid and colorless my life would be
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Wow...Trust me in this Arin. You do have it. And you are just so much better. *_* It's such a deeply moving poem. And it's so beautiful
hobo! -_- i dont have it.. its jus a hobie kinda thing... anyways thanks :)
This is awesome....! If at this age you can portray your emotions with such poignancy, I can tell, you are going to be a great poet in future! The vocabulary used is beyond the reach of an average teenager....! The lover here is so ardent in his love for his beloved! Hope it is only imaginary.... Otherwise it is rather meaningless to waste so much of passion on a fleeting infatuation! Enjoyed Arindam!
This is a lovely poem. The extent of love is beyond measure, it is far more intense than the words could ever project. The beloved is more than anything else in this world. The lover shows his willingness to die if it means a reunion in the next world. To me it is the ultimate display of perfecct love. Great poem.
Wonderful lines and words in every stanza. Like it