IF senses are allowed to speak aloud....
deeply inside she, is sweetly rhyming:
every poem brings guts galore
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Dear Sylvia, the title of the poem ''If Senses Are Allowed To Speak Aloud'' attracted me to go through the poem. Really it gave me glee abundantly. You have nicely and astutely inscribed the poem and justified the title. I loved the lines........ these two last lines above do not rhyme well your truthful poetess has only these to tell she ´s going to sell all her poems neatly tied all her words together in one cell-phone so right Beautiful poem. Full vote.
compose, compare and create this verse would not be obsolete sure, this is modern and up-to-date was this my last advice of the rate? '.. is beautiful. Enjoyed the poem. Thanks for sharing.
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ev´ry poem brings whole and glory when you seriously tell your story and gets grand applause when you live kind without much rouse A very analytical and thought provoking poem. Love the essence and the theme of this nicely written poem. 10+++
Congratulations Sylvia for green emerald.. Let me quote..Every poem brings while and glory When you seriously tell your story...Amazing lines
Every poem brings glory and explores the theme with emotion and experience of life. You are truthful poetess and you express your thought very beautifully in this interesting and tenderly expressed poem. Your Poem-book Emeralds Green- published Xlibris-UK is truly a pretty book. Revisiting your this poem values more. This is excellently penned...10