Saturday, November 7, 2015

If People Are Water Comments

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If people are water,
I am not your gentle stream,
The crystal water flowing round rocks,
Never battering.
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Mae Chase
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John S 08 November 2015

nice metaphorical poem! I think many people will be able to relate to your poem, because very few people are serene, gentle streams.

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