Tuesday, February 27, 2007

If Our Two Worlds Collide Comments

Rating: 5.0

You say it won’t work
I should look before I leap

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David Harris
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Duncan Wyllie 09 April 2007

Profound writing David, I really enjoyed the honesty about this and the way it came over Love duncan X

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Lisa Wilkinson 30 March 2007

Im left wondering curiously what came of these two worlds David, good luck whatever the case. Thanks for sharing.10/10

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Melvina Germain 04 March 2007

Excellent littel write David, I say why not, take a chance, life if full of experiences. If it doesn't work out so-be-it, learn from that experience. What if it does work out, see what you would have missed. We don't live in a perfect world but sometimes as you know David, we could end up with a perfect love. (Live, love and be happy) . ---Melvina----

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Perfectly put... to take the risk and the leap or not.... and if agreement can't be made, one can only hope for the collision... top notch. t x

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 27 February 2007

I Agree with jim on this one... David... we come up with Excuses why not, because of fear... Great write david 10...

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Not a member No 4 27 February 2007

It's such a powerful emotion that sometimes we build walls against it out of fear! A very fine poetic articulation of perhaps the most resistant of them - the ones that often snuff it out before it gets off the ground. Deft and very full use of just a very few but very well chosen words. jim

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