You say it won’t work
I should look before I leap
You say its better
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Im left wondering curiously what came of these two worlds David, good luck whatever the case. Thanks for sharing.10/10
Excellent littel write David, I say why not, take a chance, life if full of experiences. If it doesn't work out so-be-it, learn from that experience. What if it does work out, see what you would have missed. We don't live in a perfect world but sometimes as you know David, we could end up with a perfect love. (Live, love and be happy) . ---Melvina----
Perfectly put... to take the risk and the leap or not.... and if agreement can't be made, one can only hope for the collision... top notch. t x
I Agree with jim on this one... David... we come up with Excuses why not, because of fear... Great write david 10...
It's such a powerful emotion that sometimes we build walls against it out of fear! A very fine poetic articulation of perhaps the most resistant of them - the ones that often snuff it out before it gets off the ground. Deft and very full use of just a very few but very well chosen words. jim
Profound writing David, I really enjoyed the honesty about this and the way it came over Love duncan X