Friday, July 6, 2012
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I speak with angels
Every time I pray
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Joanna Pavlides
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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr
06 July 2012
Well constructed work with a rhythmic flow, and pleasant rhyme scheme...One thought for your consideration...Stanza 4/Line 4...Consider substituting 'NEW' for 'ANEW'...Either way..Well Done ~FjR~
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7/18/2025 7:58:18 PM # 1.0.0
straight from the heart confession.Flow, wording and rhyming is simply beautiful.Keep inking Joanna.