If Only You Knew Comments

your love and pain are quite visible.......excellently written....... very good........

I tried so hard to make you happy? Any man in his right mind would be forever blissful just being in the presence of anyone that can write such beautiful thoughts. Your Anam Cara is yet to be found.

I feel the pain depicted on this poem. I feel bad that the one you love and the one you cannot afford to loose will also be the one to make your heart bleed! You write in such a very affective way that your reader felt the emotion of your excellent poem. Rate: 10! PS: Kindly read my poem 'Those Eyes' it's kinda similar to this poem of yours. Thanks.

i can see the conflict and the paradox

Fine poem and elegant reconciliation. A matured expression.