Monday, December 15, 2008

If Only You Knew Comments

Rating: 5.0

You are my everything, my one and only

With out you, I just feel so lonely
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brandon febles
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Tracey Wynn 24 October 2009

Good piece. This is a poem that people can relate to and understand because they have been in the same position or something similar to it. I give you a 10 for this.

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Serenity Prayer 24 December 2008

i can relate. great job. keep up the good work.

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Joseph Poewhit 15 December 2008

Poem has a lot of deep seated emotions

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