If Only You Knew Comments

it seems like your trying to convince her, is there something wrong going on in the poem to be so passionate in a defensive way? by all means, very wonderful as ever, but i can sense that something is off key with the relationship because of your intent in this poem.

wow i am touched that was quite passoinate very nice

wow that was beautiful, i loved this one too! your wonderful when you write..i love your work..~hazel

Passion is what keep me alive, Beloved!