Monday, February 29, 2016

If Only You'd Spent A Single Minute Comments

Rating: 4.7

If only you'd spent only a single minute reading my poetry; out of those thousands of your hours; which you dedicated wholesomely to our child; at times deliberately stirring the mischievous devil within it,

If only you'd spent only a single minute reading my poetry; out of those thousands of your hours; which you meaninglessly wasted staring into blank bits of space; which led solely to the mortuaries of nothingness,
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Kumarmani Mahakul 01 March 2016

Spending single moment reading poetry is very interesting and this too gives very nice learning. Wisely penned poem shared.10

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Brian Mayo 29 February 2016

Some people just don't like poetry. Your poem has a lot going for it, but the overall message seems like sour grapes, and has the unpleasant aroma of spoiled milk. It would almost appear that you had little respect for the woman, and her choices. She sounds like a busy lady, leading a full life. Your poem is well-written and carefully constructed, but your contempt is evident in nearly every line. I'll give you a 10 for honesty and craft- -and I'll hope this is a work of complete fiction. If it IS fiction, I applaud you for your creativity, too. 'Cause I do the same thing, somethimes.

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Nikhil Parekh

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