Tuesday, March 6, 2007

If Only You Can See Comments

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If only you can see my eyes now
you will read all the untold words
If only you can see through them
you will understand that for me you are the world
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shivi 13 January 2019

lovely poem

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Gogo Amin 16 August 2013

dream man never got his dream! ! send millions of messengers through life to say life is only a dream.. you can feel him beside you and feel his breath but never talk or get complete... i loved my father more than you ever think and obeyed him to stand beside him in his day cause i was weak and i did it to prove that my whole life i never stopped trying to help him and suffered a lot to run before him to stand in his hard day but i am now fighting myself cause i failed and died... thanks dream man go away with your feeling dream.. words from shadow life in brown box... sorrow

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Obed Souza 18 July 2009

Lovely piece! Would you please read ' Inpiration'?

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Ronald Stroman 06 March 2007

i see much more when i close my eyes... and see with my mind.

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