Monday, October 8, 2007

If Only You...... Comments

Rating: 5.0

If only you could see past what I say,
Look straight into my hazel eyes,
And see how I really feel,
Behind the fake smile,
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StaceyLeigh Olner
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Scott Austin 30 November 2007

This is a excellent write which allows the read to see your true feelings. Thank you for sharing this with us. May your heart once again feel the peace and joy that you deserve. Scott

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Frankie Stones 20 October 2007

OMG its fantastic I feel like this all the time but could never write it down and you got it perfect i love it. Deserves a 10

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