If Only Time Allowed Comments

If time allowed me to live two lives instead of one, I would have no obligation except to love you this is so cute... good lines. I liked this one a lot very good job.we have a lot of if only's in our life. *Purkey Girl*

Wonderful poem. Reminds me of one I wish I had written to my husband, and some I have written, even some I have not yet the courage to include here. Adeline

Very touching write and filled with so much emotion.. If only time alows is trully a wonderfull title for it.... If only we all could turn back the clock... Or should we? ? ? Bonnie

its quite touching... nice write.. regards asma..

very pretty and quite sad and heartfelt

this is wonderful. it perfectly expresses everything you were trying to say. a perfect poem

Simply beautiful. Gave a cloud to my eyes. But oh, how true your words do ring. From one lost romantic to another Patricia

William this poem very well written, and the meanings beautiful. Regret is a painful feeling to suffer from.