Callisto, I like your poem. I like the idea of being grounded in the present, pursuing something good rather than being stuck in the past.
Below is a poem I wrote long ago about lost love which unfortunately, while sentimental, does sound a bit whiney. Still, I like it.
If Only Time Allowed
If time allowed me to live two lives instead of one,
I would have no obligation except to love you.
If only time allowed.
If I had known I was steering you into his arms,
What different words I would have spoken.
If only I had known.
If you had known my deepest thoughts and dreams,
(Perhaps you would have waited for me.)
What a life of love we might have shared.
If only you had known.
If I knew then what I know now,
(I would have waited for you.)
What sorrows I could have undone.
If only I knew then what I know now.
And yet, if ever a man loved a woman,
Even if only from afar, I loved you!
And
If time allows for second chances,
I will love you still in this life or the next.
If only time allows.
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Callisto, I like your poem. I like the idea of being grounded in the present, pursuing something good rather than being stuck in the past. Below is a poem I wrote long ago about lost love which unfortunately, while sentimental, does sound a bit whiney. Still, I like it. If Only Time Allowed If time allowed me to live two lives instead of one, I would have no obligation except to love you. If only time allowed. If I had known I was steering you into his arms, What different words I would have spoken. If only I had known. If you had known my deepest thoughts and dreams, (Perhaps you would have waited for me.) What a life of love we might have shared. If only you had known. If I knew then what I know now, (I would have waited for you.) What sorrows I could have undone. If only I knew then what I know now. And yet, if ever a man loved a woman, Even if only from afar, I loved you! And If time allows for second chances, I will love you still in this life or the next. If only time allows.