Wednesday, July 11, 2007

If Only It Had Been Hers. Comments

Rating: 3.5

Living lost in memories,
With days passing us like years,
And eternities gone in mere seconds,
The past is always here
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Jessica Millsaps
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Lucianne Fasolo 11 July 2007

There are some spelling errors, but I'd say you're in the right direction. Good poem.

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