Saturday, January 18, 2020

If Only In A Dream To Wake Comments

Rating: 5.0

Awakened still in slumbered thought
Webs of memory gently caught
Enchanted visions by a stream
And this my recollection seemed.
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Captain Cur
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Susan Williams 23 January 2020

There is truly a dream-like atmosphere in this lovely poem- -the reader feels a part of the dream, drifting along like dandelion fluff, you are a master at creating atmosphere through rhythm and word choice and descriptives. Very smooooooth piece, Captain my Captain! 10

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Kostas Lagos 19 January 2020

So, pirates do dream! And beautiful poetic dreams!

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