Friday, February 1, 2008

If Only I Had Known..../3 Comments

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If I had known that that was my last chance to kiss you...I never would of turned away.

If I had known that that was my last chance to hold your hand...I would of never let go.
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Autumn Keele
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Khairul Ahsan 11 August 2013

If I had only known... Yes, if we had known that, we would have and have not done so many things....

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Keith Hendrickson 10 September 2009

from start 2 finish this was a great piece of writing. i cant wait to read more

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Debbie Hall 19 April 2008

I'm a 52 yr. old woman in Talladega, AL. This poem has touched me in a spiritual kind of way...let me explain. My youngest daughter, Chelsea, died recently,2-16-08. She was funny, loving, a Mom herself, vivacious, courageous, and an addict. Her face was beautiful...blonde w/ green eyes. Right before she died in the hospital her boyfriend found this poem stuffed in the back of a drawer. Is there more to this poem than what I see here because in the paper that Chelsea had written there are a lot more verses to it? Did she imbellish on it? Someone e-mail me and let me know...Please WE MISS YOU CHEL'Z

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