Friday, June 10, 2011

If Only I Could Show You Comments

Rating: 5.0

I found out about your other girl friend today,
and the first thing i did, was lie.
about my past,
I would give anything to understand myself,
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stephanie Ann Lowe
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 10 June 2011

Great poem with plenty of depth. Rich in imagery and style. I rate it 10. Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2.

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