Sunday, October 11, 2009

If Only I Could Breath Comments

Rating: 4.3

Life would have been a treat
If with love my birth was greet
They left me on the street
To fend for my daily meat.
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jyoti saxena
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Deepti Agarwal 13 October 2009

A soul Entombed in a feminine guise will definately wish to 'Breathe'... n 'Live' too.. very touching... what life is it anyway if one comes to know that one is alive with the looks of men around..

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Rakesh Bedi 11 October 2009

A deeply profound poem! One wonders after the read, the pathetic helplessness of poet's soul.......

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Adi Cox 11 October 2009

'If only I could breath' seems to be a poem looking for inspiration in a troubled world. I hope your imagination will transcend yourself and that you will find the oxygen you need. This is a soul searching poem.10/10.

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