If Only I Could Breath Comments

A soul Entombed in a feminine guise will definately wish to 'Breathe'... n 'Live' too.. very touching... what life is it anyway if one comes to know that one is alive with the looks of men around..

A deeply profound poem! One wonders after the read, the pathetic helplessness of poet's soul.......

'If only I could breath' seems to be a poem looking for inspiration in a troubled world. I hope your imagination will transcend yourself and that you will find the oxygen you need. This is a soul searching poem.10/10.