If Only I Could Comments

only i could paint bubbles in the ocean i'd paint them like thousands of pearls...i wish if i could paint you as angel from heaven on earth.. so many things i could hvae done for you... beautiful poem with honest imagination./....i loved it...10

You just painted them all perfectly in my mind while reading your poem

Full of imager and wonderful activity. Very delightful.

Carnival of words, well chosen...every time I read your piece it looks like fireworks in the sky spreading like diamonds within my vision. It tickles my heart and cools down my blood pressure and sugar level.Your piece therefore is like a medication or a cure for an aching soul. Thanks Lady.

Being able to write about it, makes it so you almost can! Deborah Cromer

If I could only see those pearls around your neck, and watch you paint those stars! very nice Images. keep them coming. I enjoy them 10+++

nice flow here daydreaming for abstract goals is great exercise for the spirit

If only I could be there, I'd decorate your neck with a pink necklace made of glittering stars, and held together by a thread of angel hair. A sweet, short poem of class. H

Dear Lady Grace If only I could tell you how nice this is There would not be enough time in the world

a beautiful little write....if only i could.....i like it :) ....so many things we wish we could do....things we could be.......very well done.....i like the form too!

If only I could could go on and on and on without stopping because there are somany things that can be 'if only I could...' If only I could write, I'd write a poem about...if only I could. I only I could paint, I would paint a portrait of the heavens and the stars above...if only I could. This is a wonderful piece Lady Grace, and it warms the heart just to read it, because it makes us think of what we can do, if only we could. A 10+++++. Love & hugs, Barbara

If only, if only... You can accomplish much with a well-managed pen. This is a lovely, wistful piece, simple and deep at the same time.

If only for so many pearls and stars in the sky transports me to the finer things in creation I love the relationship between natures free gifts and items that require a lot of money. The stars, the seeds and the bubbles being worth so much more, Good on you Lady Grace

the images you write are amazing

.......like thousands of pearls; what an imagination!

if i could only paint this page of this site i'll paint them with the image of lady grace, if I get a chance to see her. Very nice poem. Kudos.