Friday, December 14, 2007

If Only For The Moment Comments

Rating: 5.0

During times beneath the heavens
Few are seldom blessed to see
Angels move away the stone
To grant a star its will to be
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O.S. Brooks
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Abid Khokhar 14 December 2007

The poem, with excessive visual imagery, bears excessive subjectivism for the personal emotions of the poet about whom I am sorry not to find any comments in comment box. Omar has diligent art of setting rhymes - though sometimes imprefect - yet tries to develop classical setting in his poem.

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