Saturday, January 21, 2023

If Only For A Second Comments

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Dark blue swells of watery mountains
Hold tears from a thousand eyes,
And collapse in a great crash of white,
As they skid and hiss towards the shore shining
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Sheryl Deane
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MAHTAB BANGALEE 22 January 2023

superb imagery poem; nicely crafted; great to read

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Anjandev Roy 21 January 2023

Such a splendid work.....thanks for sharing...

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Sheryl Deane 21 January 2023

Thank you. I have watched many sunsets thinking of her in Kommetjie, South Africa. They do indeed look like gold crowns.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 21 January 2023

this brought me to tears it reminded how I feel without my Mum

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Sheryl Deane 21 January 2023

I cry with you, and this poem helped me express my feelings. Glad you related to it.

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Jayne Louise Davies 21 January 2023

Wonderful poem! Loved every line x Thank you for sharing x

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Sheryl Deane 21 January 2023

Thanks for reading it. Best wishes to you.

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